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NCTE National Day on Writing--today!

Today is the NCTE (National Council of Teachers of English) National Day of Writing.

For more information go to http://www.ncte.org/dayonwriting/about or click under the banner.

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Manuscript Revision Retreat with Darcy Pattison

Last month I attended a Manuscript Revision Retreat with Darcy Pattison. It was a warm, cozy setting in the home of one of our Missouri children’s authors, and everyone there was fired up with enthusiasm.

For those of us whose school days are long behind us, we were re-introduced to homework! A month before the retreat we were given the first of our assignments which included books to read, manuscripts to read and evaluate from our retreat group (mine was the picture book group), and submitting a cover letter and manuscript.

Unlike most of Darcy’s revision retreats, we didn’t stay overnight, but left to go home and work on our manuscripts before returning the next morning—more homework. I felt that I got a lot accomplished in the bits of time that we had to re-write.

Between the time before the retreat and when it ended on Sunday mid-day, I cut my picture book manuscript from over 1100 words to under 850 words, and improved the story while doing so.

Much of the same advice can apply to novelists and picture book writers as well. I think that the biggest benefit for me was the focus on sensory details and word choice. Varying sentence length, attention to the number of syllables in words, and attention to vowel sounds and the sounds of consonants to create mood shows what power the ‘right’ word has in your story. Focusing on the last word on the page and making that word strong brought new insight to making a picture book dummy.

It was a very satisfying week-end in more ways than one. It was two days focused on writing for children without distraction, with new insights, tips and information, shared evaluations and critiques from other children’s writers, in the company of enthusiastic writers who are dedicated to writing good books for children.

You can visit Darcy Pattison at her website: http://www.darcypattison.com/ or click under the photo.

Some recommended books for writers:
NOVEL METAMORPHOSIS, by Darcy Pattison
30 DAYS TO A STRONGER PICTURE BOOK by Darcy Pattison
A POETRY HANDBOOK: A PROSE GUIDE TO UNDERSTANDING AND WRITING POETRY by Mary Oliver
THE FIRST FIVE PAGES by Noah Lukeman

Some websites to visit:
www.PublishersMarketPlace.com
www.rhymer.com
http://www.aaronshep.com/kidwriter/index.html
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MOLE MUSIC by David McPhail

Mole Music
David McPahil has written and illustrated some great children’s books, but the one that I love the most is MOLE MUSIC (Henry Holt & Co. 1999).

“Mole has always led a simple life, but he feels something is missing. When he first hears someone playing a violin, Mole realizes that he longs to make beautiful music, too.” During the day Mole digs tunnels. At night in his home under the ground, he plays his violin. As he gets better, he wonders if his music could reach into people’s hearts, or even change the world.

In the watercolor and ink illustrations, McPhail tells another story, from a different perspective, that shows how Mole’s “music has an effect on others that is more magical than Mole will ever know.”

MOLE MUSIC is a wonderful story of hope and peace. It shows the difference one person can make in the world, and the wonderful influence of music on the heart.
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Children's Author Websites and Blogs

I thought that I would share, once again, the websites of some of my friends who write for children. Some are famous, some are not. All are wonderful writers, and many are good friends.

Indiana was my home for most of my life, and I met some wonderful children’s writers there. Following are a few of their websites.

Katie Mitschelen: http://www.kathrynmitschelen.blogspot.com
Visit Katie at her author blog site, Droppings, then check out her chicken blog, Fowlin’ Around at: http://fowlinaround.blogspot.com/2012/04/epic-eggventure.html

Peggy Reiff Miller: http://www.peggyreiffmiller.com/index.html
Peggy’s passion is the seagoing cowboys. Visit her website to learn about Peggy and her writing. Then click on the link to go to her Seagoing cowboys website and read stories from some real cowboys: http://www.seagoingcowboys.com/

Judith L. Roth: http://judithlroth.wordpress.com/
Visit children’s author and poet at her website.

Kristi Valiant: http://kristivaliant.blogspot.com/
Wonderful author/illustrator of children's books.

Helen Frost: http://www.helenfrost.net/
Award-winning YA author and poet.

When I started out in SCBWI, some of my first contacts were authors in our neighboring state of Illinois, specifically in the Chicago area.

Esther Hershenhorn: http://www.estherhershenhorn.com/home.html
You can find Esther’s smiling face and information about her on her website. Then link to the Teaching Authors website where she and five other children’s authors blog about writing and things related to writing for children: www.teachingauthors.com

Heidi B. Roemer: http://heidibroemer.com/
Visit Heidi’s website, then check out Wild About nature where she and two other children’s authors blog about non-fiction books for children: http://wildaboutnaturewriters.blogspot.com/

Carolyn Crimi: www.carolyncrimi.com
Visit Carolyn’s website for a peek at the humor that matches the style of her hilarious picture books for children.

Since I’ve moved to Missouri, I’ve met some other wonderful children’s authors. Here are some websites to check out.

Sue Bradford Edwards: http://www.suebradfordedwards.com/

Cynthia Reeg: http://www.cynthiareegblog.com/

Katie Gast: http://katiegast.com/

Lynda S Burch: http://www.lyndasburch.com/

Shannon Moore: http://www.jacketflap.com/profile.asp?member=sbmoore

Some other author websites that I enjoy are:

Alexis O’Neill: http://schoolvisitexperts.com/
An awesome website for anyone who does author visits to schools.

Greg Pinkus: www.thehappyaccident.com

Debbie Ridpath Ohi: www.inkygirl.com

Bruce Hale: www.brucehale.com

Chris Cheng: http://www.chrischeng.com/index.htm

Kenn Nesbitt: www.poetry4kids.com


I hope you have fun surfing the web for these and other children’s authors!
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Interview with Karen Kulinski, Author of THE CABOOSEMAN'S GARDEN

Children’s author, Karen Kulinski, has had a lifelong interest in trains and railroading. Her father was a railroad man, and for many years Karen has been curator of the Griffith Historical Park & Depot Museum in her hometown of Griffith, Indiana, where at one time more than 180 trains passed each day. She has many train stories to tell, and THE CABOOSEMAN’S GARDEN is her first published book for children.

I had the pleasure of interviewing Karen about her book. Here is what she had to say.

Can you tell us a little bit about your book, THE CABOOSEMAN’S GARDEN, and what inspired you to write it?

While children, and some adults, still love trains today, most people have no idea of what an important part they played in people’s lives in days gone by. This is particularly true for those living in the latter part of the 19th century and the first half of the 20th century. And it’s this time frame in which The Cabooseman is set.

What I hope this story does is to convey the real connection that the crews on many of the freight trains had with the families living along the rail lines. Children never failed to wave at passing engineers and then wave again at the conductor and brakemen who rode in the caboose. These children felt they got to “know” the crews, and it was frequently the same for the men on the trains.

You come from a ‘train’ family, and you also have your own background related to trains. Can you tell us about that?

I was one of those kids who waved at the men in the locomotives and in the cabooses. But more than that, I came from a railroading family. My father was a railroad man, albeit one who wore a suit and tie and worked in the administrative end of railroading.

In his job, he traveled quite a bit, on trains, of course, and always brought home souvenirs to me. Decks of playing cards with different railroad company logos immediately come to mind. But my favorite railroad souvenir was the yearly calendar the Chesapeake & Ohio Railroad put out every year featuring Chessie, the company’s mascot kitten, which hung proudly in our kitchen all year.

From the time I was born, I rode trains. Not the freights like the one in The Cabooseman,
but passenger trains. Because my father worked for the railroads, we rode free so we traveled frequently. My favorite memories were sleeping in Pullman bedrooms – we had to pay some for this luxury – and eating in dining cars. I even remember the evenings spent in “club cars,” at the end of the train that featured plush chairs and couches, drinks and snacks, conversation with other travelers and even music sometimes.

Heady experiences for an impressionable child, and one that prepared me, for sure, for the stories I write. And for my work with the Museum.

THE CABOOSEMAN’S GARDEN is published by CreateSpace. Can you tell us a little bit about that, and why you decided to publish your book there?

THE CABOOSEMAN’S GARDEN doesn’t fit the parameters that today’s publishing firms require. It is much too long for a picture book and much too short for a novel. But it was a story close to my heart and a part of railroading that that I feel would’ve died with me and been lost forever.

So, I turned to Amazon’s CreateSpace, which allows writers to publish books of any and all lengths for free, or a nominal fee. It’s a do-it-yourself program, which leads you through each step and answers questions as you go along. Professional help with covers, editing, and other facets of publication is available for a fee, but having done newsletters for years, I didn’t feel the need to use these services. It took work, but I am extremely pleased with the way the book turned out.

Will I sell a lot of copies of THE CABOOSEMAN’S GARDEN? Not at all, since marketing independently published books is still a major hurdle. But the story that was close to my heart will now live on after me.

What can you tell us about yourself? Did you always want to be an author? What other interests do you have besides writing?

I was always a reader, which was a blessing since I was an only child and my railroad man father moved us more than a half a dozen times before my high school years, and once during them. I could always count on books while I was making new friends and losing old ones.

But it was a high school teacher who convinced me that I could be a writer and I never looked back from that moment. I majored in Journalism in college because I knew it led to a paying job and, in fact, worked as a newspaper reporter and editor for several years until I had my first two sons.

It was then that I tried my hand at other types of writing, four years as a humor columnist for our local daily newspaper, and ten years writing and editing a monthly employee publication for a local manufacturing facility. Jobs that fed my creativity and that could be worked around the lives of my four sons.

I came late to writing for children, but it’s what I’ve done for the past 15 years or so, and will do until the day I die.

What other books are you working on now?

Oddly enough, the book I’m now revising for the umpteenth time, a middle grade novel entitled Haunting Mom, has nothing to do with railroads. It’s about a boy whose life is changed forever when he meets a young girl ghost who inhabits the attic of the house his mother has just inherited. Determined to rid himself of both the house and the ghost, the boy discovers through the course of the book that in the right place at the right time with the right person, or ghost, change can be a good thing.

I do have a couple of railroading books that are finished and making the rounds to editors. Railroadin’ Harry is a picture book about a rabbit that is saved by a conductor and comes to live aboard a caboose with him. Rescuing Ivy tells the story of a girl who loves an elephant and must risk everything to save the innocent animal when it is condemned to death for killing a man and only the girl knows the truth. She teams up with a young circus boy, two hoboes and her older brother to spirit the elephant away to safety.

What tips or advice do you have for aspiring children’s writers?

Keep on writing. But know that children’s publishing, in fact all of publishing, is a tough business right now because the whole industry is in flux. Join the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators (www.scbwi.org) and go to their conferences and events. And, above all, try to join a writer’s group – local SCBWI chapters can often help with this – because the feedback you get from your critique partners will be invaluable in your growth as a writer.

Is there someplace on the web where readers can learn more about you and your book?

I am in the process of building a website, but you can check me out on my agent’s website: Alp Arts.

THE CABOOSEMAN’S GARDEN
Karen Kulinski, author, Eileen De Sando, illustrator
CreateSpace, May 2012
ISBN—10: 1470087073
ISBN—13: 978-1470087074

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Book Review: The Cabooseman's Garden


Children's author, Karen Kulinski, loves trains! Her father was a railroad engineer. She is the curator of the Railroad Museum in her hometown of Griffith, Indiana. What better topic for her to write about than trains! The Cabooseman's Garden is her first published children's book.

THE CABOOSEMAN’S GARDEN
by Karen Kulinski, illustrated by Eileen De Sando

Moving to the farm is not easy for Jack, but Tuesdays make all the difference. That’s the day that the cabooseman throws him chalk wrapped in newspaper comics and a small package of coal to help keep his family warm during the winter. Spring comes and Jack decides to thank the cabooseman by planting a garden next to the railroad tracks. It takes some creative thinking and determination to make it happen, but with Jack’s hard work, and a little help from his family, the garden is a success. Now the problem is how to let the cabooseman know that the garden is for him and that it’s Jack’s way of saying thank you.

THE CABOOSEMAN’S GARDEN gives readers a glimpse into life in the Midwest in the 1930’s, when every freight train ended with a caboose. Written with great action and dialogue, this book is for anyone who loves trains. The Flesch-Kincaid Grade level is 2.5.
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Independence Day Dog!


In my picture book, NAME THAT DOG!, I decided to name one of my puppies for the Fourth of July Day holiday. I feel very blessed to live in a country where I am free—free to vote, to say what I think, and to practice my religion—and I thought that it would be good to show that love for my country by naming one of the dogs in my book for Independence Day.

I decided to make it a ‘list’ poem. I began by listing all the words that I could think of that had anything to do with the Fourth of July. I had freedom, independence, liberty, parades, marching bands, fireworks, America, picnics, ice cream and many more.

From my list, I chose Liberty for my puppy’s name for the letter ‘L.’

I started putting the words together, looking especially for good rhythm and rhyme. Then I thought, how great it would be to have this poem ‘sound’ like the Fourth of July as well. Maybe I could give it the rhythm of a marching band?

Here’s what I ended up with.

Liberty

Marching bands
Fire trucks
Flags held high.
Barbecues
Hot dogs
Ice cream, pie.
Firecrackers
Fireworks
up in the sky.
Little puppy
born on the
Fourth of July.

I hope that you enjoy this great holiday! I hope it makes you think of all that the Fourth of July means to you, and that it reminds you of the freedoms that have been won for us and protected over the years. And that we all continue to work to protect those freedoms.

Happy Independence Day to everyone!
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Children's Books for Memorial Day

This week-end we celebrate the Memorial Day holiday. Originally called Decoration Day, Memorial Day is a day of remembrance for those who have died in our nation's service.

Do you know the origin of Memorial Day? How and when was it first observed? In the beginning, how was the holiday different in the South? How did the custom of wearing red poppies in honor of those who died serving our nation during war start? Who was General John A Logan? How did the Boy Scouts play a part in the celebration of this holiday?

You might find the answers in the following list of books for children about Memorial Day. If not, maybe there’s a spark for another book about Memorial Day for children somewhere here.

MEMORIAL DAY SURPRISE
Theresa Golding (Author), Alexandra Artigas (Illustrator)
Publisher: Boyds Mills Press
A boy and his mom attend a Memorial Day parade, and the boy sees his Grandfather, a veteran, in the parade!

THE WALL
Eve Bunting (Author), Ronald Himler (Illustrator)
Publisher: Sandpiper/Reading Rainbow Books
A boy visits the Vietnam Veterans Memorial with his father to find his grandfather’s name.

LET’S GET READY FOR MEMORIAL DAY
Lloyd G Douglas (Author)
Publisher: Children’s Press
A girl’s class prepares for Memorial Day, and later she goes to a war memorial with her father to honor the dead.

MEMORIAL DAY
Jacqueline S. Cotton (Author)
Publisher: Children’s Press
This easy reader explains why we celebrate Memorial Day.

MEMORIAL DAY
Robin Nelson (Author)
Publisher: Lerner
First Step Non-Fiction

MEMORIAL DAY
Karen Latchana Kenney (Author), Judith A Hunt (Illustrator)
Publisher: ABDO/ Magic Wagon
An easy-to-read picture book explaining the creation, history, and meaning of the holiday.

MEMORIAL DAY
Rebecca Riseman (Author)
Publisher: Heinemann-Raintree
Readers are introduced to the ways people mark this day.

MEMORIAL DAY
Mir Tamin Ansary (Author)
Publisher: Heinemann-Raintree
Explore the history of this holiday and the reason that it is celebrated.

MEMORIAL DAY
Trudi Strain Trueit (Author), Ronnie Rooney (Illustrator)
Publisher: Child’s World
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Children's Book Week and the Children's Choice Book Awards

Winners of the Children’s Choice Book Awards Are Announced!

Children’s Book Week 2012
May 7th to 13th

Established in 1919, Children's Book Week is the longest-running literacy initiative in the country.

Children's Book Week originated in the belief that children's books and literacy are life-changers. In 1913, Franklin K. Matthiews, the librarian of the Boy Scouts of America, began touring the country to promote higher standards in children's books. He proposed creating a Children's Book Week, which would be supported by all interested groups: publishers, booksellers, and librarians.

Mathiews enlisted two important allies: Frederic G. Melcher, the visionary editor of Publishers Weekly, and Anne Carroll Moore, the Superintendent of Children's Works at the New York Public Library and a major figure in the library world. With the help of Melcher and Moore, in 1916, the American Booksellers Association and the American Library Association sponsored a Good Book Week with the Boy Scouts of America.

In 1944, the Children’s Book Council was established and assumed responsibility for administering Children's Book Week. In 2008, Children’s Book Week moved from November to May. At that time, administration of Children’s Book Week was transferred to Every Child a Reader, the philanthropic arm of the children’s publishing industry.

Every Child a Reader is dedicated to supporting positive programs and opportunities that help promote the enjoyment of reading among America’s youth with the goal of instilling a lifelong love of reading. Its goals echo those of the CBC, which are to make the reading and enjoyment of children’s books an essential part of America’s educational and social goals and to enhance public perception of the importance of reading.

In 2008, the Children’s Book Council created the Children's Choice Book Awards, the only national book awards program where winning titles are selected by young readers of all ages. Winners of the 2012 Children’s Choice Book Awards are:

K-2nd grade:
THREE HENS AND A PEACOCK
by Lester L. Laminack, illustrated by Henry Cole (Peachtree)

3RD-4TH grade:
BAD KITTY MEETS THE BABY
by Nick Bruel (Roaring Brook/Macmillan)

5th-6th grade:
OK FOR NOW
by Gary D. Schmidt (Clarion Books/Houghton Mifflin Harcourt)

Teen Book of the year:
CLOCKWORK PRINCE: THE INFERNAL DEVICES, BOOK TWO
by Cassandra Clare (Margaret K. McElderry Books/Simon & Schuster)

Author of the Year:
Jeff Kinney
for DIARY OF A WIMPY KID 6: CABIN FEVER (Amulet Books/Abrams)

Illustrator of the Year:
Brian Selznick
for WONDERSTRUCK (Scholastic)

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Children's Poetry Month


Poetry month is wrapping up, and I have been sorely lacking at blogging here. I hope you enjoy these bits and pieces related to children’s poetry, along with an original poem as my gift to you.

Some children’s POETRY TRIVIA:

1—This author has written several rhyming picture books with dinosaurs as the main character. My favorite, since I’ve been a school nurse, is this book that begins: “What if a dinosaur catches the flu? Does he whimper and whine in between each Atchoo?” Name the author and the book.

2—This author has been recognized by Guinness World Records as the world’s most prolific anthologist of poetry for children, with 113 titles to his credit. Well known for his anthologies for beginning readers, his own books include Alpahthoughts, and Days to Celebrate. Name the author.

3—He is the author of poetry collections for beginning readers and picture books, including this book that includes animals such as the Spinachickens and the Bananaconda. Name the author and the book.

4—A short novel in free verse by Newberry Medal winner, Sharon Creech, this book about a boy and his dog is a favorite of mine. It includes a great Teacher’s Guide at the end of the book. Name the book.

5—What do lambs do when they won’t go to sleep at night? Find out in this picture book in verse by author, Alice McGinty. Name the book.

6—Wonderful rhyming shape poems take you through the seasons in this picture book by children’s author and poet, Heidi B. Roemer. Name the book.

7—A writer’s alphabet book published by Sleeping Bear Press, this book is written by children’s author Esther Hershenhorn, and is still a favorite of mine. Name the book.

8—Absolutely Angels, Poems for Children and Other Believers, is an anthology compiled by this former editor of Guideposts for Kids. She is the author of stories, poems, articles and books for children and adults. Name the author.

9—This poet, mostly known for her novels-in-verse and poetry for teens, has received numerous awards for her books which include Hidden, Crossing Stones, and Keesha’s House. Name the author.

10—This familiar figure is the imaginary author of nursery rhymes and fairy tales and has been well-known over generations. Name this famous author.

A few favorite WEBSITES:

http://www.gigglepoetry.com/
Bruce Lansky’s Giggle Poetry
Some categories include: poetry class, poetry fun, poetry theater and word games. Giggle Poetry has been selected for the ALA great web sites award and the National Parenting Publications Award (NAPPA Honor).

http://www.poetry4kids.com/
Ken Nesbitt’s Poetry for Kids
Some categories include: funny poems, games, interviews, poetry lessons and a rhyming dictionary,

http://www.rhymezone.com/
Rhyme Zone
An online rhyming dictionary. You can also search for synonyms, antonyms, definitions, homophones and more.

Some POETRY QUOTES:

A poem is good for the soul. –Ralph Fletcher

Resist the temptation to rhyme.... For writers of rhyme, the bar of excellence is raised a notch or two because contrived, hackneyed rhymes are so easy to write—and so painful to read. –J. Patrick Lewis

What poetry does at its very best is to make the reader feel. Feel deeply and truly. —Jane Yolen

Poetry is speaking painting. –Plutarch

A poem begins in delight and ends in wisdom - Robert Frost

ANSWERS to Children’s Poetry Trivia:
1—Jane Yolen, How Do Dinosaurs Get Well Soon
2—Lee Bennett Hopkins
3—Jack Prelutsky, Scranimals
4—Love that Dog
5—Ten Little Lambs
6—Come to My Party
7—S is for Story
8—Mary Lou Carney
9—Helen Frost
10—Mother Goose

Wishing you a Happy Poetry Month for 2012!
And leaving you with dreams of summer—

Fishing For a Bite

I’m tired of worms
Said the fish in the lake.
I’d rather have
Some chocolate cake,
A piece of cheese,
Or I suppose,
Some ankles, knees,
Or dirty toes.
So if you want
To get a bite,
Just cast your legs
In the lake tonight.
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